http://ssend.com/blog/is-this-a-good-start-for-a-short-story/ SSend.com Tue, 07 Feb 2012 08:40:51 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 http://ssend.com/blog/is-this-a-good-start-for-a-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-717 Rita_ B Sat, 23 Jan 2010 09:46:38 +0000 http://ssend.com/blog/is-this-a-good-start-for-a-short-story/#comment-717 The war broke out suddenly, ending with utter devastation. The war broke out suddenly, ending with utter devastation.

]]> http://ssend.com/blog/is-this-a-good-start-for-a-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-716 Vindogga Thu, 21 Jan 2010 11:30:50 +0000 http://ssend.com/blog/is-this-a-good-start-for-a-short-story/#comment-716 A better one would "Once upon a time" A better one would
“Once upon a time”

]]> http://ssend.com/blog/is-this-a-good-start-for-a-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-715 Sarah Thu, 21 Jan 2010 04:38:06 +0000 http://ssend.com/blog/is-this-a-good-start-for-a-short-story/#comment-715 yes its good, just revise once. yes its good, just revise once.

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